Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Tuesday/title:Code Talker, chapter 17 First Landing/pgs:113-119,min:15

Ned has been waiting in the war for some time now and the war had been on for a good time so it is time that he gets some action. He has been in his first war but he has friends to back him up. He has some experience in war and has killed some Japanese. Now Ned is at a island fighting the Japanese and they had made nicknames for many things, almost everything. The bombers were women and the fighters were men.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

This is Helpful

Unknown said...

Your writing includes many details but it is not very sophisticated and not well planned out. You just place all your details down, and it seems as though you do not try to make it better. I am only 12 years old and I feel that this is not very well written.