Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Wednesday/title:Blood on the River, chapter 2/pgs:6-13,min:15

The boys name is Samuel Collier and was in jail and got lucky that some one pulled him out of jail and took Samuel to the orphanage, and told them that he found Samuel and told them his age and parents names and were they are and asked them if they could take him. Reverend Hunt told him that they would and took Samuel to a bed with sheets. Reverend is a tall, quiet man with more patience than anyone. He told Samuel that taking the locket was wrong and that it was no longer his, it was the Pawn Shop Owner's and that Samuel had to make decisions based on love, not anger. Samuel told him that it was based on love, he loved his mum. Because Samuel was a danger to the other children, he was to serve Captain John Smith and the boy,Richard, who got his tooth knocked out was to serve Reverend on the journey to the new world. Samuel has board the ship and a man with a sword was walking towards him, Captain John Smith. He looked at Samuel and said that he was good and was tough and a fighter.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Some of your sentences are really long Erick. You need to work on breaking those into two or three complete sentences. This will help with the flow of your ideas.
-Miss Damberger 10/10 (for last week's)